Excerpt from Chapter 6 of Sons of the Sphinx by Cheryl Carpinello
A tall man stands and motions at the door. His lips
are moving, but I can’t hear a word. A cone-shaped hat sits on his head and a
kilt-like garment swishes against his legs.
Light sparkles off the huge jeweled necklace that rests on his bare
chest. It appears to sway as he breathes. Good thing the necklace is pretty
because he is ugly. Oops, I’m not supposed to say that. But talk about an
unattractive man. It’s his nose—so square and large—that really makes him that
way.
Sitting next to him is the most beautiful woman I’ve
ever seen. Black hair frames her delicate face, an older version of
Ankhesenamun’s, and earrings shaped as gold eyes dangle from her tiny ears. Her
bare shoulders sparkle like glitter above a golden gown that flows down her
slender body. It is gathered at the waist with a jewel-encrusted belt. She
looks stunning and totally unaffected by the huge elephant.
“Who are those two?” I ask, nodding my head in their
direction. Tut averts his eyes from the scene in front of us.
“That is my father, Akhenaten.”
“Oh.” I can’t seem to manage any more than that. They
don’t really look like father and son, but then I don’t see the resemblance
between my dad and me. My grandmother always said I favored him.
“And that is his wife and Hesena’s mother, Nefertiti.”
Well, you could knock me over with a feather. This is
the most talked about queen in all of Egyptian history. Everything I’ve read
says that her beauty knows no comparison. The evidence stands right here in
front of me.
I look back to Tut’s father. How in the world does
someone that beautiful marry someone like that?
I’m having trouble taking all this in. Akhenaten,
Nefertiti, Tut, Hesena—and me—all in the same room, well sort of anyway. I’m
beginning to wonder where I’m headed and how I’m going to get home. Nerves make
my stomach flip uneasily.
Chills come over me like my blood is made up of ice
water running throughout my body. I shiver. I try to shrink behind Tut. Evil. I remember how my grandmother
would describe these feelings. Rosa, she would say. It feels like someone is
walking over my grave. I would look at her, not understanding. She wasn’t dead.
How in the world could someone walk over her grave? I know now. And whoever is
doing the walking leaves evil in each of his footprints.
The king and the other Tut follow the elephant out a
side door, and Hesena trails behind.
Nefertiti walks by, elegant and regal. Her imperial
gaze halts any who might think to precede her. One by one, the people stand
aside and bow their heads as she floats past. Her gaze sweeps over us, but it
is not evil, just interested, as if she senses something where we stand.
“She can’t see us, can she?”
“No, Roosa. My people cannot see us. It is not
allowed. Come, let’s follow,” he says. “I want to show you my father’s zoo.”
“Your father has a zoo! No way. No one owns a zoo,
no...” I stop short. Tut’s image wavers before me. I suck in air, but my lungs
feel empty. Pulsing blood thunders through my body. My fingers turn white at
the knuckles as I clutch his hand. It’s as if I’ve just been punched in the
stomach. Evil envelopes me, threatening to squeeze the life out of me. Please
body, breathe! Am I dying? How can this be? No one can see us!
Book: Sons of the
Sphinx
Character: Rosa
Author Name: Cheryl
Carpinello
Character Introduction:
Hi! I’m Rosa. I’m
15 years old and a sophomore in high school. I’m your typical teenager—well,
almost. I don’t have many friends anymore, but it’s
hard to blame the other kids. If I was them, I’d probably steer clear of me
too, at least most of the time. No one is ever mean to me; I’ve
grown up with most of them, and on my bad days, they try to ignore me. Wish I
could do the same to those who talk to me. Mostly I just shake my head and
carry on.
What conflict are you up against?
OMG. That is a loaded question. I mean, I’m
15. Conflicts are part of my daily life! Passing my classes. Trying to get a
date for school dances. Dealing with Nana’s gift nearly every day while
I try not to lose my mind.
Oh, I bet you’re talking about in the story.
Right, I should have known that. Well, without giving too much away, my ability
to hear dead people talk pits me against an evil man, introduces me to the most
handsome boy I’ve ever seen, and puts my life
in danger. Sounds great doesn’t it? Nope. Not at all.
What is your strongest personality trait?
That would have to be my
sarcastic humor. When you have a gift like mine, you need something to fall
back on. Here are a few instances of it:
“It would be something to tell
my, my…Right, I could tell the kids in my classes that I
went to ancient Egypt with the ghost of King Tut. Can you hear the death knell?
Bring out the strait jacket.”
“Most girls I know have had at
least one boyfriend and have even gone on dates, even it is was with a group of
kids. Me, the last time I held hands with a boy was in the fourth grade. We
went on a trip to the zoo, and I had to hold hands with red-headed Erik as the
we crossed the road…How sad it that?”
“In front of me is desert,
sand, open sky, and heat for as far as I can see. Already sweat is starting to
run down my face and neck. I thought gym class was bad. I’m
not even moving here, and it’s as if a river is coursing
through me. I sweat more standing still in this country than I ever did playing
basketball.”
If you could change one thing in this world, what would you
change?
I would make it so my Nana was still alive. I know that sounds
self-centered, but she left me with her gift and didn’t
give me any advice. I’m not sure what I’m
supposed to do with it. It scares me, really scares me sometimes. I often
wonder if she was ever scared. Now that I’ve been through this
experience, I long to talk with her about it—to see if there is a way to go
out and do good with it, not just wait around and see what happens.
Q&A for Double
Decker Tour
1. What made you
choose ancient Egypt for the historical setting of Sons of the Sphinx?
I’ve always been fascinated with ancient times, and Egypt is
at the center of my fascination. Ancient Egypt is mysterious, mystic, and romantic
to many people, including my target audience: young readers.
I didn’t really consider doing a story set back then until
after my visit to Egypt in 2008 and the tour of King Tut’s memorabilia in the
US. An idea for a story around Tut’s life started to grow. In fact, that story
is told by Tut himself in my short historical Tutankhamen Speaks. While that was a fun write, it turned out it
wasn’t the story I wanted to tell. I wanted an adventure and to set that
adventure in ancient Egypt with Tut sounded like an interesting premise.
2. Why do you write
middle grade/tween/YA novels?
Coming from 25 years of teaching high school students, I
want to use my experience to engage those readers and younger ones in the hopes
of enticing them to read more. My Arthurian adventures are for readers aged
8/9-12. Kids love Medieval Times. While Guinevere:
On the Eve of Legend and Young
Knights of the Round Table: The King’s Ransom are exciting adventure
stories, readers learn that while the journey to self-discovery is not a smooth
one, it is one that can be traveled. Even young kids are starting to wonder
where they belong in the grand scheme of the universe.
Sons of the Sphinx
is geared more to readers age 12 and up. At the heart of the story is the tale
of Rosa’s coming of age. She is a high school sophomore who is desperate to
find her place in life just as were the students I taught. It doesn’t help that
she has inherited her Nana’s gift. As
she finds out, where she wants to be, may not be where her life takes her, but
she has to learn how to make the best of it.
3. Sons of the Sphinx is already gathering awards. Explain, if you
can, what makes your books special.
Overall, my experience as a teacher and my ability to
understand what motivates kids is a big factor in the success of my books. To
that I would also have to add my philosophy on life, which is based on Joseph
Campbell’s idea of the Hero’s Journey. The
Hero With A Thousand Faces is really my Bible when I write. Campbell writes
of the journey all of us embark on everyday of our lives: the search for self
and worth, the successes and failures, the temptations and the denials.
According to him, this is not a single journey, but one that is repeated
throughout our lives.
Embedded within all of my characters’ adventures is their
quest to find themselves. This is for them the first time they’ve really been
able to explore their place in the world. My readers are also experiencing this
in their lives. However, my books don’t preach or shout this out loud; instead,
this journey is couched in an exciting and often dangerous adventure. This type
of story offers readers a type of catharsis the old Greek playwrights used:
Letting the audience experience the emotions of the characters while remaining
somewhat safe. Those plays also carried individual meaning for each of the
audience members and were very popular.
4. Tell us about
you’re currently working on.
I’ve just finished writing the first draft of the sequel to Guinevere: On the Eve of Legend. This
was meant to be a stand-alone story, but over the years, readers have been
asking what happens with the young Princess Guinevere and, especially, her
companion Cedwyn. In fact, for about a year and a half now, Cedwyn has been
reminding me that he wants to be a knight, and he wants to know when that is
going to happen. I finally gave in. I believe the sequel Guinevere: At the Dawn of Legend—Cedwyn’s Story is going to be a
much stronger story where my characters make significant growth. Hoping to have
it out in late 2015.
5. What are your
long-term writing projects?
Oh yes. I’m hoping to have the first book of my trilogy The Feather of the Phoenix out in 2016.
These tales will take place, in a manner of speaking, in the ancient worlds of
Atlantis, Pompeii, and the Norse civilization. As of now, the books are The Atlantean Horse, The Ashes of Pompeii, and The Norse Star.
Also in the planning stages are The Trojan War and a sequel to Young
Knights of the Round Table: The King’s Ransom.
Factoids for Cheryl Carpinello
1. What are
your favorite activities when you're not writing?
I enjoy reading, spending time with my family, and working in
the yard. I’m definitely not a housekeeper
2. Where would
we find you when you’re
totally relaxing?
Sitting on the beach in Puerto Aventuras, Mexico!
3. Any pets?
None at this time. I am a pet lover, but I’ve
had to put too many down to go through that heartbreak anytime soon. My last
ones were my horse (38 years), my kids’ cat (18 years), my son’s
two dogs (way too soon), and my daughter’s little
dog (also too soon).
4. Any kids?
We have two kids, a boy and a girl. Both are married to
wonderful people. Our son and daughter-in-law have a 6-year-old boy and a
little girl 2 months old. Our daughter and son-in-law have a 2-year-old
toddler. Those 3 grandkids keep us young.
5. What
inspired you to go into teaching before writing?
Teaching was my first profession. I enjoy working with high
school students. They are such fun to interact with, and it’s
fascinating to watch them grow up and mature.
6. What’s
your favorite color or color combination?
Blue’s always been my favorite
color. It’s the color of my eyes, of the sky, and of the
ocean.
7. Favorite
beverage of all time?
Just can’t pass up a good marguerita.
8. You’ve clearly done some
traveling. What was your ultimate travel destination?
Every extended trip we’ve taken has been the trip of
a lifetime. In 2008, we spent 3 weeks in Egypt and traveled from Cairo to Aswan
and eventually back to Cairo by local train. Absolutely in awe of that ancient
world sitting in the modern one.
In Sept. 2014, we spent 3 weeks traveling around the UK by
car. Our aim was to immerse ourselves in the land that gave us Arthurian
Legend. I also wanted to explore the locations I used in my book Young
Knights of the Round Table: The King’s Ransom.
As an added bonus, I was invited to Manorbier Castle (also in YK) for a Meet
and Greet the Author!
We visit Mexico and Las Vegas on a regular basis, and each
fall, we travel to college football games. My husband prefers them to the pros,
and I just love to travel! FYI: in addition to being a retired teacher and a
writer, I’m also a retired airline employee:)
9. Favorite
snack?
I devour nachos and Auntie Anne’s
pretezels!
10. Which
character do you love the most in all of your books? If you can't choose just
one, pick a few.
The Princess Guinevere from Guinevere: On the Eve of Legend
because she was my first character, and Rosa from Sons of the Sphinx
because I loved how she handled herself in ancient Egypt. Also, I would love to
have been her.
11. If you owned
a time machine, what period would you most love to visit?
It would have to be the ancient worlds of Greece, Rome,
Pompeii, Atlantis, and Egypt. Those civilizations have given the modern world
so much, even Atlantis, which is supposedly mythical.
12. Strangest
item currently taking up space in your writing cave?
My writing cave is supposed to be the bedroom off the living
room, but this is also my oldest grandson’s room and
the toy room for both grandsons! I usually do my writing on the couch or on the
patio in the summer.
13. What book
are you currently reading?
I read several books at a time, a habit left over from my
college days when I would take 4 or 5 literature classes at the same time.
Currently I’m reading Hard Choices by Hillary Clinton, The
Nile by Toby Wilkinson, and Twenty Years After by Alexander Dumas.
As you can see, I’m somewhat of an eclectic
reader.
14. Who are your
favorite authors?
I grab anything by the writing duo of Douglas Preston and
Lincoln Childs, and I also love their individual books. David Baldacci’s books are also
favorites. I’m
somewhat addicted to blood & guts & thrillers!
15. Do you
listen to music when you write?
Yes, and I also put on my favorite movies: the ones I’ve seen a million times
and don’t have to
pay attention to. Sons of the Sphinx was written to Mumford & Sons The
Road to Red Rocks. I can see the amphitheater from my living room windows.
16. If you could
live anyway, where would it be?
Right where I’m at, in Colorado. We have the
best weather—All four seasons. I live next to the foothills, and
a drive up in the Rockies is a cure for any ailment. My immediate family is all
here, except for one sister. When I need a change, it’s so easy
just to hop a plane and go to the beach.
17. What are
your favorite movies?
Star Wars, The Hobbit, The Lord of the Rings, Indiana
Jones, Harry Potter, and The Mummy. I’ve watched
each of these so many times that I’ve lost track, and my husband
shakes his head when he sees on and says, “Really?”
I just smile.
18. Do you have
a favorite TV show?
Yes. I like NCIS and CSI (both the originals). The
Amazing Race is also a big hit with me. Love to see all the places the
teams go.
19. Favorite
books as a kid?
I devoured anything with horses. Then, as now, I re-read my
favorites over and over. The ones I loved the most: Walter Farley’s
The Black Stallion series and Rutherford Montgomery’s
The Golden Stallion series.
20. What other
jobs have you had in addition to writing?
I’m a twice-retired high school
English teacher, a retired airline employee, and currently an Ambassador at
Denver International Airport.
21. What, if
anything, bugs you when you read a novel, fiction or non-fiction?
Coming across numerous misspelled words, sentence fragments,
and incorrect facts. That comes from 25+ years as an English teacher and
writing instructor. Nothing is ever perfect, especially writing, but good
editing is essential for authors.
22. Are you an
early bird or a night owl?
Definitely a night owl! I don’t usually
go to sleep until midnight, and now that I’m retired,
I comfortable with not seeing the sun come up in the morning:) That’s
one of the reasons I love Las Vegas.
23. Do you
workout? Run? Walk?
I’m a walker. It’s
quiet and gives me thinking time.
24. Favorite
food?
That would be a smothered shredded beef burrito washed down
with a marguerita.
25. Do you like to
dress up or dress down?
Dress Down. A good old pair of jeans or shorts makes the best
day better along with tennis shoes or flip-flops.
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